I asked you to -Poem-
“I asked
you
To pick up
my feelings
From the
wet ground,
But you
stepped on them
As you
loved the sound.
I asked
you
To catch
them
As they
were falling down
From the
tree of hope,
But you
didn’t even
Look
around.
I asked
you
To listen
to the sound
Of the
wind,
But you
didn’t
Recognize
my voice…
So,how can
you say
That you
adore autumn
If you
can’t find a way
To make it
stay?”
(I asked you
to,Anne Maria)
NOTE: All of us have heard
the statement: “I really do care
about you!”,but how many persons have actually proved that feeling by using
actions? They said that they would be there to support us,but the next
instant,they vanished from our life or didn’t do anything to show us their
affection.They couldn’t find a way to make us stay.Even if we’ve tried ourselves to look for a reason to
remain,we could not manage to find it and keep it.
My
intention was to express the feeling of deception by writing a few lines about
it and associate it with the nostalgic,yet stunning season of autumn,with its
leaves,that seem to be rather lost feelings.
Omg this is such a beautiful poem, you wrote it so well. I especially love the last verse!
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Thanks,Izzy! x
ȘtergereWhat a lovely poem, I think it's beautiful the way you write especially the use of autumn bluring with feelings as it's a time of transitioning. I'd love to read more poetry on here in future :)
RăspundețiȘtergerelots of love, Marianne xxx
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Thank you so much! :) I'm glad to know that you enjoyed it! Sorry for the late reply! x
ȘtergereI love your writing Anne Maria!
RăspundețiȘtergereI'm glad you do! :)
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